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PASST DES?
BTW ists nit von mir!

Dear Sir or Madam,

When I was a little child my sister and I dreamt of owning our own hotel and built it of Lego® bricks.
Many years later this dream still was relevant and I applied to the HBLA Sitzenberg for agriculture and dietetics. While I was visiting this school I got even more interested in tourism, but also in organizational works.

The change of school, that was nothing to do with the subjects, did not harm that. So I completed several practicals in banks and in a restaurant.
Now I want to study tourism management, because I got even more interested in tourism through these practicals, and in fact at the IMC Krems, because it seems to be the best possibility of studying tourism management for me, because among other things there I am able to learn two languages, except of English, and I am in favour of the practical training semesters.

I hope I will get the change to study at your university.

Yours faithfully

dreamt = dreamed ansonsten passts