this butterfly is dead
linus 21.10.2003 - 15:05 426 1
linus
Big d00d
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i search u...in the world i built a church for u make stop the flow in the river of emotions a picture of u hangs alone on my wall kills all the demons inside...of me this butterfly is dead now he dies in yr hands and his wings wasn't full of pain
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total_eclipse
Banned
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ich finde es zwar toll, wenn man gedichte schreibt und die postet, aber bitte, BITTE gewöhn dir eine korrekte schreibweise an! schliesslich sollte man ja eine sprache erst völlig beherrschen, bevor man mit ihr arbeitet!
i search u...in the world in which world? i built a church for u make stop the flow in the river of emotions a picture of u hangs alone on my wall kills all the demons inside...of me this butterfly is dead now he dies in yr hands in this case it would be 'died' because it's past and his wings wasn't full of pain I'd rather say 'weren't', wings are plural
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