Chrome Heart

my tears a real
why u stop to feel
u makes a part of me dead
and u feel so proud
u gift me a home...and kicked me out
i'll shut up
u feel so glory
we are here
walk under the same sun
the crows fly'en in the room of lights
and i want make u fly
but u lie and smile
and i know
yes i can't remember me
the first contact
i watched u
i looked in yr drunked eyes
yr mimic was so sweet
and i'm sure about my feelings...to u
but u make me chrash down
and i wish for a moment
i can't stop follow u
but i feel more
what ever i do

Zitat von linus

my tears a real
ARE
why u stop to feel
why DID you stop feeling
u makes a part of me dead
you MAKE .....
and u feel so proud
u gift me a home...and kicked me out
you GAVE me a home...
i'll shut up
u feel so glory
you feel SUCH a glory
we are here
walk under the same sun
the crows fly'en in the room of lights
FLYING
and i want make u fly
I want TO make you fly
but u lie and smile
and i know
yes i can't remember me
the first contact
i watched u
i looked in yr drunked eyes
yr mimic was so sweet
and i'm sure about my feelings...to u
feeling FOR you
but u make me chrash down
and i wish for a moment
?
i can't stop follow u
i can't stop FOLLOWING you
but i feel more
what ever i do

bitte nur als konstruktive kritik anzusehn, nicht als flame o.ä.

Zitat von total_eclipse

bitte nur als konstruktive kritik anzusehn, nicht als flame o.ä.

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